Beautiful !! but..
This was really well done !! The way the red blob bounces around and then slowly transformed into a being was really beautiful and captivating to watch, the animation was extremely smooth !!! One thing i really didn't like was the " Grey mark " that was left behind for a brief moment every time an object stopped moving for a bit. I'm not sure why you did this but personally i found it rather distracting.
I find it interesting that 2 animations made it to front page kind of portraying the same message ( yours and then mine, wind in the wires ) about the planet falling into a bad place. I believe you told your story well and the visuals were really nice. The music was also really beautiful, very melancholy like feel.
Over all, you have done really well, congrats !!